high in epicness
It was pretty epic, and I loved how the quiet drums in the back, the part at :55ish that got all awesome and stuff. I think it could have built up to an even more epic and dramatic climax than it did however, with a larger volume change and a more huge orchestra thingy.
Also, I hated the part at 1:04 where it went all wah wah for no reason, since all the epic music cut out for a few seconds. If there was hardly any sound there at all it would have made it more epic, but the wah part didn't really fit.
I don't know if it's exactly what raw epicness would sound like, but it's a pretty good try.